Bang! Thump thump! Ahhhh!!!
There were so many noises in the middle of the night so I went to see what was going on.
“Hmmm what’s making all that noise?”
As I looked out the window, I saw this big, hairy loud TROLL!?!
I sprinted downstairs to wake my family up. My mum, dad, my twin Jelena, my 1 year old sister Amber and my 10 year old brother, Ethan. We packed our stuff like our devices, canned food, 7 packets of chips, more food, 10 bottles of water, spare clothes, blankets, money, first aid kit and our dog, Coco’s food and toys. Jelena put Amber in the stroller,
Ethan put a leash on Coco and me and Dad brought all the stuff. We hopped into the caravan and off we went.
“Oh my gosh! The troll was right next to our house!” Jelena screamed.
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What did you think of my story?
Anna,
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I like how you discribed your setting. Do you think that you could develop this? I like how you made plenty of connections to your own life. I look forward to seeing more!
Hi Anna,
ReplyDeleteYour story was great Anna. It was so nice how you incorporated your friends but changed them to be your siblings. Even though the story was short you still explained it very well!
What made you write about this?